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Adding some stuff I found (and the only thing I've recently written, eh) and putting everything into one thread.
Eh. I'm really not that impressed with any of this stuff, it's really freely-written, thoughts to paper, no real form.
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Dreams of innocence and songs of sorrow
Filled with truthful beauty and lordlike charms,
Hearts led to darkness and minds to resting
Love to yearning and hate to borrowed sleep.
Fissures of words crawl aimlessly forwards
Whilst ignorance cries for motherly care.
Gems glittering with reflected darkness
Jewels dripping with solitary tears.
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Perfumed vapours wafting scent,
Scarlet waves of discontent.
Lettered servants of squandered life.
Lovely airs of wondered strife.
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Too oft I dream of starlet fancies
Moondrops trickling down glittering falls
Life's wondered merriment in sparkling dreams
Until we learn we've squandered it all.
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Whispered yearnings of assembled dreams
Flights of unspoken fancy's wings
Hearts trembling imperceptibly
In sweet, intoxicating agony.
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One final draught to quench this flame
Growing, burning, consuming mine heart
One last note of love's refrain
Before, at last, we must depart.
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Alone in this world of lonely souls.
Vacant stares within empty shells.
Light's fires finally quenched.
By apathy's final throes.
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| Free writing, Spring 2001. -
04-21-02
Endlessly congregating sleeping empty door why crows soundless keeping castle why life enjoys sleeping loud hurt why heart beating stop enjoy life too much fast why needing more pain amulet darkness too much pain why life is stuff hurting arm tired sleep more walk door clouded brains walk more why sleep too much food rice life empty meaning door reckless dreaming stop writing floor pain wrist life why too much sleep art write more sing la why I like sing more too much thoughts psychology meaning test mannequin hurt wrist stop writing too much jumbled poem write more blink hurt why sleep more hamlet soliloquy to be why no more why door open enter itch so much thoughts time think more more write I whilst seeing hurt breathing ouch stop writing now I stop writing
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04-21-02
Life's last solace from unholy rantings
Walking through darkness, blind, unseeing
Why do I know the way, why in this place
Emptiness, desolate, barren of dreaming
Immolation, fleeting fancies,
Life's enjoyment, flying beings
Wakeful hearts, awake and dreaming
Our last shadow of life's embrace.
Endless ransoms of love's last dreams
Thoughts unending, terror's come
Rampant fighting, here and there
Life unyielding, end is come.
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04-21-02
heart life end think more why clock time like beauty no more know why unhappy dream poet happy dreams need know love like embrace heart why no door closed too much terror why come no more hate why door life no more so much hate like love why life no more hate seem dream raven crow blue color sky night black area number why sleep dream want more so much do more write more sing listen I say more why no I need life like see no more why I want life you like hair face eyes love eyes time no more want like need happy so much exact why wrist hurt need writing stop but no why no know too much why see listen sing me want why too much why see more closed door no enter stop dream eat less sleep like more dream stop why need more why listen more hair no more why like less need no more see why know now eye see you want more like stop writing
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Love end die try sleep cry cereal joy job hobby end cry life a sock ride try hi what how good moral tiger night day try hi good cry tear hope dream slow ethereal shame share life joy friend real not how side west jump how live cry real strife bog chafe dream to her hello how arm remember memory book find live clock time fight no more good try sleep tired go real fly hell live seem bye end kill I heart you real no bye.
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04-21-02
One moment before darkness transforms into dawn,
A shadowy figure steals silently across the silken lawn.
With eyes of sadness and eyes of fear,
Eyes searching everywhere, for a hope so dear.
As morning brightens the once darkened skies,
The running figure jumps, then flies.
With eyes of cheeriness, eyes wide and bright,
Eyes beholding the beautiful sunlight.
At the middle of the day, at the time of noon,
The figure slows and hovers, preparing to land soon.
With eyes that show no tire, eyes that show pride,
Eyes that are arrogant, eyes that are tried.
At evening, when the day draws to a close,
The figure falls and lands, remembering its previous woes.
With eyes that show anger, eyes that show hate,
Eyes that want revenge, yet eyes that can wait.
As night creeps near, and the shadows grow tall,
The figure sleeps, yet the eyes do not form a wall.
With eyes that are tired, yet eyes that stay strong,
Eyes that remember, eyes that aren't wrong.
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04-21-02
Dreaming, desiring to be with you,
Pleading for solace for my heart's void,
I wish for your company, for I truly know
That your touch alone can bring me comfort.
Every day, every night away from you,
My heart constricts, threatens to leave me.
My sanity is fleeting, my heart is taking over,
For I know thoughts of you are foremost above.
Vast this void seems, emptiness unsurpassable,
I wish for you to fill it, to be here with me.
I desire to look deeply into, your crystalline eyes
And listen to the music of your tranquil voice.
On this empty day, my dreary spirit grows heavy,
As I know we still have time we must wait
Until we are allowed to meet, to accompany
One another, in happy existence together.
Nightly I wonder, daily I dream,
Of the time that is endless, it seems.
I can not wait for the time to finally come
When I can be with you, and can be happy once again.
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Thank you for reading. Come again  .
(Oh, and btw, looking for critique if possible; like, if good or bad, why? thanks).
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04-22-02
Quote: Originally posted by SirVLCIV
Dreaming, desiring to be with you,
Pleading for solace for my heart's void,
I wish for your company, for I truly know
That your touch alone can bring me comfort.
Every day, every night away from you,
My heart constricts, threatens to leave me.
My sanity is fleeting, my heart is taking over,
For I know thoughts of you are foremost above.
Vast this void seems, emptiness unsurpassable,
I wish for you to fill it, to be here with me.
I desire to look deeply into, your crystalline eyes
And listen to the music of your tranquil voice.
On this empty day, my dreary spirit grows heavy,
As I know we still have time we must wait
Until we are allowed to meet, to accompany
One another, in happy existence together.
Nightly I wonder, daily I dream,
Of the time that is endless, it seems.
I can not wait for the time to finally come
When I can be with you, and can be happy once again. | I like your style....and I remember reading this one before, which is perhaps my favorite.
Why?...the way you illustrate emotions....your use of words, ...I could almost feel my own heart breaking when I read this one in particular.
Once again, I'm sorry to hear about her....
....Your a poet my friend, and a very good one at that
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Thank you good sir... thank you... hehe; I'm actually working on some prose right now, which seems to affect my style of writing poetry...
I'm going to write some more poetry this week; although it's finals week, I have a lot of free time also...
Actually... the one female, that took me over a year to get over... I never could write anything about our time together... it seemed beyond my ability as a writer to explain my feelings...
I'm going to try to reflect, however... I am going to try.
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I'm adding to this tomorrow hopefully, including some more hopeless romantic crap.
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Yeah, I hope to add to this today.
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