syprus tree
syprus tree
feed me some nectar
juice of your loins
come down
flow on me
nectar tree
nectar tree
play me a rythem
make your branches in to music
and sing with your leaves.

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hey mister sand man
have you come a long way
do your feet still hurt from walking
do you wish you had a cane.

well maybe if my money
had saved up to my sum
i could by you transporation
but im still poor as one.

hey mister sand mand
are all of your grains gone
are they over in the sunlights eyes
to let it take a nod.

i guess im not the person
that you were looking for
for i am a insomniac
and for me sleep is no more.

well thank ya! here's a couple more.


in my latent prestige
is a bluebird
he wistles out all of his songs
for he has no lips
of which he could speak
but his tuneing melody
plays on.

in a violent way of restoration
he figures
a find more than twice
he drops his old feathers
and picks up his tappings
as he runs longingly to fly.
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hey now
i like your glasses
where'd you get them?

i went to target and got me the same
nice and cheap
but they broke ten minutes later.

the frailty of being poor
is a shame that is wasped in and out
too bad i can't afford anything
oh well, i will in ten years.

yea well its a stupid game you play my dear
you weaping willow cant always cry
you make excuses for all you bum fuck lanes.

well here's an idea take your own responsibility
take life as a key hold
and cherish everything inside.

...yea...

you have some wonderful things here....i especially love the 'mister sandman' one....very great...kinda sad...

anyhow, i know that a changing of styles can be uncomfortable at first...but im sure if you stick with this, the tree will blossem and grow. never give up hope, and always be true to yourself.(not like you dont already know everthing im saying here..)

i too have recently saw my poems (laughs at calling those 'things' poems) change and grow...for which i believe to be the better. ...now maybe im the only one who thinks so...but then again..thats all that really matters now isn't it...

hehe, i like the way you think johnny, whats your thread called? i shal look it up! and thank you very much for the support as well

heehee..thanks...the thread is "The Thorns of Irony"...but dont be too hard on yourself if i dont see you there...

and the support? no problem, thats what we are here to do...support one another...