just another poem
PoetryDiscuss just another poem in the The Pen forums; the following poem was written by me and my best friend in a joint effort. she wanted me to post it here to see what you people all thought about ...
the following poem was written by me and my best friend in a joint effort. she wanted me to post it here to see what you people all thought about it. so please after you read it please reply so i know what you think of it!
CoNfRoNtAtIoN
i saw her beauty
as she stood before me
before me in the moonlight
her life glowing through
through her possessed translucent skin
all through some unknown force
she glanced at me in fear
wondering what i might do
not knowing if she was safe
startled she may be
but her curiosity keeps her here
so she stays
studying my every move
slowly
i start to approach
her fear grows stronger
as her beautiful wings rise
rise from her back
gently stretching
i take one step closer
two, three
knowing in her mind
i am a giant
she being very frail
i slowly place my hand out
not knowing what she'd do
she hesitated
then gathered her courage
slowly lands in my palm
such a tiny creature
small enough to be a bug
yet so close to being human
in so many ways
yet more ways than one
i'm sure she was confused
i was as well
then she spoke
such a piteous voice
"My name is Rain, Princess of the Forest Fairies."
"What species are you?"
"Cause you are surely not a fairy."
i whispered gently
as not to hurt her fragile ears
or cause her fly away
away on her shimmery wings
"I am Julie."
"I am a human."
she smiled ever so softly
and bowed her tiny head
in appreciation she flapped her tiny wings
small sparkle like objects fell
like pieces of silver-green glitter
fell from her magnificent transparent wings
"Nice to meet you Julie, the human."
she said as she giggled happily
"But i'm sorry now i must be going."
she said as she looked at the brightening sky
then as quickly as she appeared
she was gone
gone as daylight approached
the forest slowly revealed itself
realizing the experience i had just had
i thought to myself
as i made my way back home
i wonder if i'll ever see her again.
FrEaKs WiLl TaKe OvEr ThE wOrLd!!
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Very nice work. I like the free prose. Keep it up. BTW, hi. Don't think we've ever met. *tips hat*
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i love that poem,
its very imaginative, and it gave me goosebumpies just reading it...
this may sound stupid, but the way you and your friend wrote it, made me feel as if i was experiencing it too....
i could picture the whole thing in my head...
great job.
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