Mommy always told me
Beware of the clown

But I never listened cause....
he always made me feel up
..when i was down..

...He spoke to me again today..
and this time I pretended he wasnt there...
But it was hard ... so hard ..
when he`s pulling me by the hair

I tried to run.. (mommy help)
But it was far too late...
and when i saw him smile...
I knew .. he had chosen my fate

Then.. he placed his hands
Upon my neck...
squeezed real hard..
And finnished with a sweet peck..

hmm....the idea is creepy.....there's some nice imagery.....but you've constricted yourself to a rhyme scheme here....rhyme scheme bad!!!!.....but, yet, it kinda works with this piece, but i think it can be left out......

also, it was comical....

very creepy, and I like clowns.