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03-07-05
Fast as electrons zooming through circuits, dozens of demons race to settle a score— it’s a sore point, weak spot, wide open wound; they feel like a john who’s meeting a whore: they’re all hands and action, friction and heat; they pounce, then penetrate—deeper than deep. they batter, then bruise; grinding the meat; flawed, fatal, and fled are the spirits they keep. Dismal and deadened, beyond hope of help is the soul trapped in the prison that shuts itself off from Grace, refusing all help, inured to the damage, stuck in the ruts of weary, well-worn grooves, cadged for by rote in the bowels of the sacrificial goat. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. the devil's got the cue ball, the table's bein' run...
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This is an interesting piece... I liked it, it was different. I think the green is distracting though.  Don't Drink and Park. Accidents cause people. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. | |
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03-14-05
Does it bother you now that we hurt like sin, or that our sing-song burden does not seem to lift? We’ve grown accustomed to laughter, inured to the crimson of paperweights crafted from lead-lined frames of windows sealed shutter than doors bolted dead. The way to the fields, hills, forests, and lakes was once free, clear, and unfettered; but now, like the murk of a musty old cellar, the solace we seek is stunted and pale. Cankered and calloused like lusterless love, our souls shy away from their weal. Running around, a bull whose skin’s pierced, hell-bent on destroying the cape red as blood, ours is the method that moves in a moment, the motion whose muscle-bound beauty has fled; ours is the final dull fatal death blow, whose bounty, whose body is dangerous dead. For meaning flies free as the life-blood flows out, and Time like an essence whose seconds spread forth will no longer walk languidly, lacking restraint in an implicit agreement with magnetic North. Forever, once sighted is no longer blind; Forever once sighted is no longer far off; Forever once sighted has no seconds to sight like before when in days of yore wild rains did pour upon the shore of tomorrow. It doesn’t bother you a bit, does it? For the day was bound to end. You won’t even try to defend yourself when, in pious rage, the heathen rave irreligiously in the china shop, shattering the sacred porcelain without regard. Well bully for you.  To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. the devil's got the cue ball, the table's bein' run...
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| In Perspective -
03-16-05
We be children when then was cause and land was won by battle cry. We be men and women when appellations and circumlocutions quelled nations. Design--deisgnations for cool curmudgeons like we, whose warm hearts beat with the rhythms of the streets' neon lights, determining our blonde fates, as dumb as mute mallards with worn creeds carried lovelorn to the city of angels where loud bells peel for weddings at which Elvis sings in heavenly realms-- mans the massive helms, weaves its magic spell, mystical and tragic, on us all. Do you hear its call? Hear its song, like the birds in the elms, and if we still have qualms about the glass ceiling we have managed to break through then let's have our palms read in the Spring by a full-fledged prophet, whose true vision is clearer than the fears in our souls. The goals we've won (Yawn) for ourselves are not half as valuable as the Fall of Man appeared to the weird and wild demons, cold and alone in the zone of oblivion. Uncertain of what I talk about? It's freedom, my precious jewel, from the prowl of the wolf, from the fall of the leaf, from the law of the safe whose shelter swelters in a fool's paradise, dead as a porcelain vase, holding artificial roses in front of stiff poses held by false ministers of clay-baked cloisters, whose magisterial, ephemeral, chosen children, soon lost to the cost are, or seem to dream of called-out, devout, phallus- thrust trust- blessed us. Either, or-- it is this: Judas' kiss, or that: fat Pilate; Neither, nor-- it is not this: Jezebel's pleasure hot, nor that: King David's deadly sling shot, We won't wait any more for Destiny's lore to scare the Whore of Babylon whose Satanic con cannot defeat the One who washed His disciples' feet. Eat these words like bread before birds whose song in elms aims to construct by design a sign. And read it. Then read it again to let it fit.  To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. the devil's got the cue ball, the table's bein' run...
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| …and say, “I love you!” -
03-16-05
Cy put the “sin” in cynic. He knew how to settle a score. Christian drank vodka and tonic; he put his hand to the plow. He married a waitress named Nathalia. Cy fought his cousins at the reception; in a drunken rage, he hammered his foes. The women heard about it; came charging in; with courage broke up the fight; so it goes. Somewhere out there on those flat horizons, one cold, lonely Saskatchewan winter night I was conceived in whispering pines. Into this world I came, loved and held dear, firstborn son in a family of five. Why question Fate’s gifts—“just look at them and sigh.”  To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. the devil's got the cue ball, the table's bein' run...
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| Fashion Show -
03-19-05
Costly apparel designed to impress addresses the question of who has been blessed by the rich hand of Fate and a touch of disdain, again and again revealing that the fee for pleasure and pain is more or less free from interest paid by the Vain whose circumstantial pomp repeats a refrain that passionate people caught up in wonder consider clever as they ponder whatever flighty melodies flit through their thick skulls, running the gamut of songs: From Gulls to Larks; from Starlings to Quail; from Wrens to Thrush; from Dolphin to Whale; to the cool cadences of Kate Bush. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. the devil's got the cue ball, the table's bein' run...
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| Read: The Colour of My Blood -
03-22-05
Bleed poetry, like verbs that live to die on a page; Let your arteries pump purple passion, freely; like actors in a tragedy dying on a stage, the knives that cut one to the quick are steely. Street poets strive to know so little of their art; hold so much of bluntness, raw, banal, and hard; and Death, a reigning mistress, called to play her part in some vignette performed before some guard whose posts forsaken long ago were nevermore resumed, fakes the love she promised not to give, as Apathy, her sister, stout and swart and peacock-plumed, pretends to care, and then proceeds to grieve the souls of holy-minded men and women everywhere, the hearts and minds of all the meek who strive to gain that New Jerusalem on some mountain in the air so that weak ones need no longer downward doubting dive. Do you crave the blood that from my veins flows forth? Will you play the dark vampire in this gothic dream? Tonight, tonight mild, mild hearts softly beat beneath the white moon’s wild, wild crystal pale blue stream. Romance yearns to rustle in immortal restless seas. Sweet, serene, and nuanced is the bed of rosy-petaled bliss that aims to thrill and please even as the hot red blood rushes to the head. Surrender like a prisoner whose fate is justly sealed. No longer will I bite when I am bitten. When the blood has ceased to flow, it will be congealed. When the poem is read it will be written. Note: I use "die" in the first line in the same sense that John Donne and the metaphysical poets used it, as a synonym for sexual orgasm. In this sense, each poem that has not been "tried" is a virgin. Like Alice Cooper sings, "My heart's a virgin, it ain't never been tried. And you know I'll never cry. I'll never cry." This is from the song, "Only Women Bleed" — One of my favorite Alice Cooper songs of all time!  To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. the devil's got the cue ball, the table's bein' run...
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JOHN THE WEREWOLF: A SONNET
Gothic beyond all the limits of grace,
Intense as a Titian placed on stark display,
Was the look of utter horror on John’s face.
Full was the moon on that night they did say,
When he was bit by the wolf who did prey
Upon humans to sate his appetite.
John was hellbent to survive, come what may.
He fought off the beast with all of his might.
But little did he know the full extent
Of the power of the wolf; what it meant
To be bitten; what a vile miscreant
He would become; and what horrid torment
John would bring down on his neighbors and friends
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| Overdue Depth Charges -
04-15-05
Overdue Depth Charges Caught in a mesh of responsibility, I flicker like trapped light edging along the filament of a dying neon tube; crying out at the darkness that swallows my depth in a depth that is deeper than death, my voice cracks amid the stillness of a solemn shadow cast from a corner streetlight whose epic journey into the recesses of my soul shimmers with a maudlin echo in the mystic whirlpools of my heart. Over behind the gnarled old fence set against the weedy back lot where my tortured psyche sits on permanent display, like the chassis of a gutted Chevy, stands the cheesy, long-since-faded billboard we all viewed with contempt back in the ’70s. Remember? The one advertising Chanel No. 5 with a twiggy bleach-blonde model decked out in a green and blue print paisley pant suit! Colour the contours of our collective unconscious in pastels and lurid yellows whose shadings and hues hang over the dim façade of rectitude we’ve built around the corner from where we used to live back in the green hay days of our misspent youth. “It wasn’t like that other night,” I whisper, pressing my lips against the hushed wall of worry you’ve woven into a sullen wreath and wrapped in woe-stricken haste around your beautiful ears. If in some desert mirage we could find our way through to the oasis of splendid dreams far from our stale city streets, we might muse on the answer to the riddle of what it was like. “Ineffable” is the word whose amorphous meanings edge along the outskirts, splashing the muddy curb-waters of my mind, in the light of the dying neon’s fading flicker. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. the devil's got the cue ball, the table's bein' run...
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| Mysts of Tynedale -
04-15-05
In strong and bidden alms for the uncouth subtle among Tynedale's youths comes a quaint collection of misspent pennies These are the mysts of Tynedale blithe and impenetrable colder than the sea under the winter wind These are the mysts of Tynedale raw and unexpected wilder than the call of the comet's flame through the vastness of space These are the mysts of Tynedale correct and inaccessible purer than the virgin arrayed in whitest sheepskin with ample dowry bestowed Cast the pennies in the wishing well though misspent they will save Tynedale To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. the devil's got the cue ball, the table's bein' run...
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Originally Posted by raja the rebel Overdue Depth Charges Caught in a mesh of responsibility, I flicker like trapped light edging along the filament of a dying neon tube; crying out at the darkness that swallows my depth in a depth that is deeper than death, my voice cracks amid the stillness of a solemn shadow cast from a corner streetlight whose epic journey into the recesses of my soul shimmers with a maudlin echo in the mystic whirlpools of my heart. Over behind the gnarled old fence set against the weedy back lot where my tortured psyche sits on permanent display, like the chassis of a gutted Chevy, stands the cheesy, long-since-faded billboard we all viewed with contempt back in the ’70s. Remember? The one advertising Chanel No. 5 with a twiggy bleach-blonde model decked out in a green and blue print paisley pant suit! Colour the contours of our collective unconscious in pastels and lurid yellows whose shadings and hues hang over the dim façade of rectitude we’ve built around the corner from where we used to live back in the green hay days of our misspent youth. “It wasn’t like that other night,” I whisper, pressing my lips against the hushed wall of worry you’ve woven into a sullen wreath and wrapped in woe-stricken haste around your beautiful ears. If in some desert mirage we could find our way through to the oasis of splendid dreams far from our stale city streets, we might muse on the answer to the riddle of what it was like. “Ineffable” is the word whose amorphous meanings edge along the outskirts, splashing the muddy curb-waters of my mind, in the light of the dying neon’s fading flicker. | I really enjoy your writing. It's different and brings interesting perspective wth a unique voice. Very cool.
This line is awesome: "Caught in a mesh of responsibility, I flicker like trapped light edging along the filament of a dying neon tube;" | |
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