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Awesome!!!!
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Pretty good!
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Flawed...
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It Sucked!!!
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05-15-01
I want to cry.
I want to die.
I want to see.
I want to be.
I want to need.
I want to bleed.
I want to feel.
I want to kneel.
I want to kill.
I want to thrill.
I want to steal.
I want to deal.
I want to love.
I want to be above.
I always cry.
I soon will die.
I have yet to see.
I have yet to be.
I have all the need.
I take time to bleed.
I am to numb to feel.
I am to proud to kneel.
I have yet to kill.
I always thrill.
I love to steal.
I love to deal.
I try to love.
I will never be above...
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05-16-01
Well,im glad you all like this so much that u r replying like CRAZY!!!!!
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05-16-01
I really liked it..Its sad that so many of us have these dreams we never reach..But I guess at least to pretend we can will make us forget..I loved it sweetie..Good job!! Keep them comin' 
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05-16-01
i tink its good
.:.misconceptions.something.i.regret::
but.still.i.blame.only.you::for.i.told.the.whole.truth::
and.you.would.have.none::
you.cast.me.out.like.a.begging.dog::
for.scraps.of.sympathy.at.your.table::
are.frowned.upon::
like.the.mistake.that.i.am.:. | |
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06-28-01
my posts are very unpopular
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06-28-01
i think it is cool. | |
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06-28-01
It was ok.  | |
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07-26-01
i want...........i need...........nothing! | |
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07-27-01
nice to know forgotten,i never really liked this one...
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07-27-01
I really liked it because it was kept nice and simple and basic just like emotions. Our most base emotions are real simple and basic, they produce the best poetry because they show our true self. Well that's just my opinion, hope to hear more from you soon.
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07-27-01
wow,good point,i have another poem i just wrote yesterday called "i hear the shadows" if u want more...
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07-27-01
Remember it's nice to get feedback on your poetry but the main reason for writing poetry is the feelings that it gives to yourself. Poetry is an outlet for emotions, so do it for you. Its good that you share and I will read whatever you write. Have fun my friend.
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07-27-01
yeah,i do.its my outlet instead of drugs and shit...
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07-27-01
Mine help's me from going even more insane than I am. Have a look at my poetry on ' Can I Have A Go' thread if you like, and tell me what you think. See you mate.
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