This thread is dedicated to Hayley Lemonis,the girl i love

LOPEZ
This soul is old and strong
But the will is not human
Its more like a figure eight
Its more like a synthetic vision

Its a cold moral of cheat
A carried over sample
Taken from the nickle
A synthetic vision

Coil of fragile disposition
Hell of a smash
Tooken back a few
Synthetic steps

Angry as this tortured lion
Low like a dead widdow
Merely a under rating
Angry as this soul

And before it responds
The sound comes to a stop
The vision becomes the decoy
The soul becomes synthetic

And the first day is over

KISS
A carismatic trait of revenge bestowed behind
Clair,divert,sardonic chamber of whispers
Nostalgia intense,conformity in pentions
Why shall we abolish love?
Why shall we abolish rape?
Both are starting to get beatuiful
Isnt that accurate?
True,the factual,methodical asunder
Under,While behind this trait of revenge
Composing bywords into kisses
Lets give love a chance
Lets give rape a try
Rip the spine from zion
Jump from this brick wall spire
While this brother like emassary sleeps
This text reaps on these faggots
My friends are my hate,venture
,And they are my navigation
There your convex,A petty quirk
I want to love them
While i rape them
Conform into beautiful palpitate
the platform owes them a visit
True,methodical asunder
Under,while behind itself
Listen
The kisses are the bywords
The jester,the player,the bride,the pyramid
lets love them
lets rape them
End the palpitate
Really speed the text
Clair,divert this chamber
Then rape yourself

This is a little different, but the words flow very nicely. Good job. Keep it up.
Janni