Beautiful...

nice babe

Thanks Goddess and BlackFlame.

i love it more more more

Avante!

This is good work! If you feel it - write about it.

Your work is really good, I like "How do I not love you" alot, I can relate to what you're saying, in fact I ask that to myself many times a day... great great...

This is to Maestro, Miserable soul, Goddess of Death, and everyone who I left out. You really made me see what reality is.

You all proved me wrong

Never did I think I’d find myself here
Walking aimless and confused
All the great writers and people I once looked up to
Now only push me down, further into drowning

I came to you for knowledge and experience
Not for sympathy and pity
I hoped to ask for the ability
To write one extraordinary poem

I envisioned it affecting everyone
But ended up with only insults
I thought people would accept the credit
As a gift or gratitude, but no one participated

Ones who I found to be so called friends
Only were mirages in my mind
I thought this was a better world
But they quickly shot that down

You all proved me wrong about all my beliefs
The “pot-of-gold at the end of the rainbow”
Every comment and opinion is a lie
Reality is full of hypocrites and a torn society

I don’t want what you think I asked for
My “White-trailer-trash scribbling” may have no meaning
But they do to me, even if they don’t to you
That’s the difference between you and I

You all were inspirations till now
All the respect and honor is merely shards of broken glass
I thought I could learn technique and form
From great writers and great people

But you all proved me wrong

all very good

Thanks....


*shrugs, and walks off*



-Dalynda

Very good, keep it up

My love,

I love them all and I hope you keep on writing them so I can keep on reading them.

From,
Death. x

Can I ask all of you something???

*Am I not getting any better at writing poetry....cause it feels like it. But maybe it's I'm to hyper to realize what I am saying at this moment......I don't think slick_fang's physcotic.....I'm beginning to think I am though..... Muahhhhhhhh! Blllaaaaah.



EEEEEEEK!

(Thinks to meself.....I'm an idoit!)

Boy a rousing game of hide and seek the only thing i don't like is somethimes i forget where i pur myself oh well i'll find me later

now unto your works "Very good" i like them hell i even like "Being Unique" it is very well done and of course unique and as for your question the only thing i vcan say is if you like it then that is all that counts of course a compliment or cunstructive critisism is always welcomed but not needed to validate a persons self worth so in other words VERY GOOD and keep up with the poems i would like to read more

Dearest Maestro,

I am truely sorry if I did something wrong. But what does helping me with writing my poem have anything to do with writing me? Is there something you want?

If you are mad please tell me why...I am unaware.

Maestro,

You're from Salem?

To Ms. Raine:

That is why.

Are you upset?

A little, I suppose. Perhaps I misunderstood...

BTW: I'm from Salem.

I did not mean that for in a bad way...I was only saying that those were the people that contributed to the creation of the poem. You were the only one who stuck with me and helped me. Miseralsoul offered but got fed up with waiting and everyone else was well you know. I did not intend on upsetting you I am truely sorry.