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LivingDeadGirl · **Suicide poems -** 02-28-01

"Final Bow"

I'm standning to this latter now
About to take my final bow
This rope around my neck is strong
Unlike me this rope will hold on
On to my body far beyond my final breath
Yes, If I was more like this rope I would not be here embracing death
A tear in my eye is blocking my vision
I havent jumped yet I can change my desicion
I cannot do that
I cannot go back
My fists clench and my fingernails dig into my skin
Blood flows from my hands as I contemplate where to begin
As usual I'm all alone in this cold dark room
I suppose I'll also be all alone in my cold dark tomb
I'm tightening the rope now
About to take my final bow
With a rose in my pocket
And aroung my neck my mommas locket
What shall my final words be?
An apology? A final plea?
The only words that cometo mind before its all done
Is the simple countdown of 3...2...1
-Heather S.
____________________________________________________________

"You'll learn"
I found a way to ease the pain
I just take this razor and cut this vein
I'll feel a trickle of blood flowing
I'll do this all without them knowing
I cried...You didnt care
I killed...On your dare
No one important it was just me
I took an early step into eternity
"Another suicide" the papers will say
You wont care you'll just throw it away
By doing this I'm not asking for your sympothy or your tears
I just want to sleep without any fears
Soft whispering surrounds you
I'm watching everything you do
In life you tortured me in death its you turn
For all my suffering you'll quikly learn
-Heather S.

[Edited by LivingDeadGirl on 02-28-2001 at 01:27 PM]

Loki · 02-28-01

Just as I've remarked on a single of your poems I find a new masterpiece to take the place above the others. You are a true poet.

LivingDeadGirl · 02-28-01

Thank you so much! I didnt even think anyone would reply to any of these (I didnt think they were any good) Thanx 4 replying

silverangel53114 · 03-01-01

those poems... damn they were really good.. i wish i could write that good, have you written anything else?

LivingDeadGirl · 03-02-01

Quote:

Originally posted by silverangel53114
those poems... damn they were really good.. i wish i could write that good, have you written anything else?

Thanx alot. Yeah, I have alot of poems,theyre really morbid and strange though. I'll have some more posted soon.
Thanx once again to silver and Loki

Wickedly,
Heather

luthien · 03-05-01

You're wonderful. Stunning imagery. Don't ever think you're no good. We love you.

LivingDeadGirl · 03-05-01

Quote:

Originally posted by luthien
You're wonderful. Stunning imagery. Don't ever think you're no good. We love you.

Awwwwwww............Thanx

taintedexile · 01-31-03

Hey, your poems i love, do you mind if i re-post them on my thread for my friends to read?

icp 4ever in me · 02-12-03

wonderful..

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