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i wrote this one about a girl that i loved. but it seemed that i could never have her. and late at night, i can't sleep cuz she's always on my mind...


ALONE-
It's 3a.m., and i can't sleep.
now i realize how much
i want you. but it seems
that i can't have you.
now that i found someone.
i'm feeling more alone.
than i ever have before.

It's 4:30. i pace around the
hallways, thinking of you.
ur always on my mine. cause
you come swimming into view.
and now i'm feeling more alone.
than i ever had before.

It's 6a.m. everything is quiet,
since your not around. it's the
truth i cannot erase.
my love for you is just too
deep. if you want to know
how deeply my love goes,
it's deeper than bones.and
now i'm feeling more alone.
than i ever had before.

It's 7:30. i'm looking through
a window, searching for something,
i could never give you. and there's
someone who understands you more
than i do. a sadness i can't erase.
now i'm feeling even more alone.
than i ever had before...




THAT NIGHT-
as we drived. we rolled the windows down cause this cool air is curious let the whole world look in who cares who sees anything. we drove away to escape it all. the rain was pouring down so i slowed down. but you wanted it fast cause that's the way you liked it. and in my sight i could see a stalled car. so i turned to the right and the next thing i knew i woke up there were people standing all around. i stood up, i couldn't find you here. where have you gone my dear? i saw you, laying down by the curve. i picked you up. i held you in my arms. i looked straight into your eyes.saying i love you dearly. as tightly as i held you, you were already gone. i've lost my love, that night.



I'm kinda numb and so distorted. kinda tragic kinda insecure. and i'm such a cancer on the face of everything that's beautiful!

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07-18-01

That's a very nice poem... have anymore?

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