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The End (something i wrote today ) - 04-25-02

The End
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alone
away
tomorrow
today
you make no sense
you waste you time
contradicting yourself
to die
to live
to take
to give
what's the point?
we all are fucked
we are all sick inside
you think you're great
you think you're all that matters in this world
well i hope you know
i cant stand you
you make me want to hurl
you care for noone but yourself
you hurt all those around you
cant you see the pain you've caused?
all your selfish ways make me sick

you're not above anyone else
you're just as low as me
in the end, you will see
the fucker you've become
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-this is where I say goodbye, this is where my story ends...- Chris Hall, Stabbing Westward ('90-'02)
  
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Now Thats What I Call Heavy Venting - 04-25-02

Sounds very angry and hurt.....
but I like it!! I look forward to reading some more!
  
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hey biotch - 05-01-02

i like it...
  
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Hey, not bad.



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