Heyloo all, I was woundering if any off you could read my poem and try to figure out its meaning.. some of it is slightly meaningless but most of it means something.. there is one key line which opens up the entire meaning.. this will be VERY hard without knowing me but I want to know wat peoples responces are to it..

here it is...

Despairs window

Dip your fingers into my soul,
Through the eyes the blue withhold
Stare deep into my doom
As you try to see the despair,
I hold deep inside

I sit and wonder how you feel,
As you stare into the holes within
The careful trust you feel for me,
Sitting with fear of what may be,

The loving the pain only my eyes can see
The holes into the deepest souls can be
The life has passed and has now begun
Endless pity into endless slum


Good huntting all =) Hope you can figure it out.. 2 out of around 30 friends have figured it out.. and one of them pointted me here =)
Blessed be all
Be happy
and Good Luck
Arnie (SpiritWalker)

The first stanza makes me think of something like the surface of the ocean, or another large body of water...

But, it's the second line of the second stanza that really sticks in my head.

Somewhere, something makes me think of someone driving a car, as well...

But, I really think it's that second line of the second stanza that tells the story.

This is going to require further thought...

I really like the poem.


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-Walker of Shadows
Hunter of the Hidden
Hero of Darkness