Riddle me this and riddle me that...who the fuck are you to attack my back!

Speaking unspoken works...its all the same!

Preaching and pondering your stupid emotions, all over a mistery I made...over me!

Funny you are in your ways...steping in to closed doors and closing closed windows...you make me laugh!

Walking/stalking behind my every word, hanging on everything I write, think and say...

Only the strong will survive...the weak will just turn to dust...SAD...it will be most of us!

BUT not me...

No, no, nooooo...for you see, I can't die if I'm the one doing all the killing! KILLING OF YOUR (HEARTS), MINDS AND SOULS..bodies fall the same...

I need not wish you death no longer...it will come all in time, that fact by its self gives to my rage, oh the joy!!!!

HAHAHAHAHA...

INSANE??? I think so...but none of you know me enough to really know.

I'm killing you already...

that was good SOLACE...so what happen

Thank you for your reply! Thank you even more so for making it a good one!

So you ask what happen...Hmm, well thats a good question! I almost died cause I couldn't feed my anger! See I got so mad at an event that took place that I was going to kill the guy...yet I couldn't...he wasn;'t near me or close or even in the same city...and that just made my rage grow even more so...and cause of the fact that at that time I couldn't do anything i grew so upset, so angered, so ENRAGED and couldn't do anything to fix it that it almost killed me! Tell me that isn't fucked up? Yep...so now, I feel I may break down and kill...and its so real to me that it feels like it already happened and I can laugh and joke about it as if it wasn't a big deal...

Oh I will so kill him...and a lot of others too!!! Of its good to be true to yourself...


Well every time I talk or writh this stuff I feel as though it doesn't come out right so I'll stop now!!!

Thanks again so much...SO SO SOOO MUCH for reading my poem!

Thanks for your time!

I feel it inside of me , I rip open my chest and reveal an Ebony black heart pulsing, and in its dark depths i see my reaflection looking out at me ! the truth becomes clear I am those things that in my heart, I hold most dear!
When you look in a mirror , Whos looking at Who?









Lol , sorry this isnt critasism , its just u inspired me and it just typed its self out wierd huhh? but its not a first time i did wierd shit! loved your poem bud!

Why thak you kind sur, very nice of you!

All you wrote means a lot to me..thank you!!!

I hope to see your name around more!!! Oh and please...feel free to fill me threads up with your writings also, they are great! Wounderful reads!

Thansk again!

wow there is actually talent in this family

Aww...

I like to think sooo! I try, thats all I really can say! I TRY!!!

Thanks ECF!

"HUGS"

hi SOLACE, and great job.

ohhhh u try, i try but it still doenst work for me

Hey, umm thanks, yeah!

Aww my cheezy little girl, youll make daddy proud no matter what!

I'm sure you got a lot of untapped skill, just don't beat yourself up over nothing like this! Daddy loves ya!

dad's got a good technique, you write differently which is what this forum needs!

yes he does...and it was a very good poem by the way SOLACE...love you!!! keep writing!!

Wow, thank you...

That was very nice of you sweetie pie! No really though, thanks a lot thoes words are something so great to be told to me, I value what you wrote to me so much! Thank you!!!

I don't like to conform when my mind is so different! I'm sure you can tell from just posts alone! Again, thank you so, soo, sooooo much!

Thank you hunny bunz, I love you too, and I will keep writen!