depravation

Cold, watch agendas fall in on themselves
God why must i stay alive at all
This unrelenting, failing, nothing
Bleeding epicenter falling
Save the sun from breaking down the wall

The Hidden

if what i seek beyond the shadows
slowly forms in front of me
alienic subtlety
divine and hidden from the battle
worlds formed in shallow waters
enter, find the world empty
everything i hoped would end me
the wounds exposed to fail the martyr...

Shadowebs

see them when your sleeping...
a scarred parasite,
thought he cast a shadow...
god bring the light.
the wind blows westward...
down in the mud,
hovering apostle...
tell us what you should.
the sun...
is the shadow.

i.call.this.style.-emotional.association
its.a.detached.view.of.reality.vs.the.lucid.dream.thus.depravation.of.knowing.wh at.is.real

in.other.words.-sensory.depravation-.caught.between.sensorium.and.reality

hmm well I really liked shadowebs. it was very vivid and I didn't feel deprived of my senses at all while reading it. though I can see the the person in the peice could feel that way.

dragon

devils cloud upon your shoulder scraping through the broken records
loveless shame descends upon the waking eyes of bitter strangers
dont believe the words of liars spitting their unending stories
hoping you would be salvation, all they do is bring you down
afterimges repeating endlessness inside of nothing
soulless victims dying whispers
-come down off that cross my friend-

hmm very good, i believe you have improved since you started writing here. great read.

ty

wc

fugitive angel
running through the pieces of an urban suburbia

we are fugitives knockin down the walls...

closure has come to me... and true love is a tragedy

but underground vision is a visual treasure
astral traveler beneath the sun that shines upon my beautiful

the sun bleeds down in nuclear wind that burns up everyone

hmm very pretty phrases, though I do not kno wif they are to speak to as a whole or as just individual lines. there is some common themes but over all it is very vague and I do not get a deeper meaning.