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Poetry Discuss Deep Shades in the The Pen forums; Sinister of the Divine Deep shades of Nocturne Do loathe my eyes Which covet their beauty Silent still, they wish for No notice And scorn that which they attract So ...

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Deep Shades - 02-18-03

Sinister of the Divine


Deep shades of Nocturne
Do loathe my eyes
Which covet their beauty

Silent still, they wish for No notice
And scorn that which they attract

So sent hither
Within cavernous folds
The Sorceress rides

Her Despicable refrain, burning these eyes
For She hunts the watchers, those who seek

Yet devoid of fear
As when she draws close
I am stolen Within

Traversing the Darkness, beautifully cursed
I am destined forever to be..


A golden energy
Was rising out of my head
I shed my evil skin
And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
The impossible seems possible
This time I'm an electric wire
If the sun can radiate then so can I

  
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02-18-03

~claps~

well done - didn't hurt now did it?



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02-18-03

I guess not


A golden energy
Was rising out of my head
I shed my evil skin
And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
The impossible seems possible
This time I'm an electric wire
If the sun can radiate then so can I

  
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02-18-03

Great read doll.... quite mysterious...


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thankyou babe


A golden energy
Was rising out of my head
I shed my evil skin
And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
The impossible seems possible
This time I'm an electric wire
If the sun can radiate then so can I

  
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02-19-03

hehehe U playin hide and seek



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02-19-03

It would seem so..


A golden energy
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And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
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02-19-03

Im not one for rhyme, but this emerged..
Amusing? Or just damn strange


Lullaby

The ashen lips caressed the hymn
In the silence of a lie
For who could know what dwelt within?

His final Lullaby

The crimson host poured forth his song
But none could hear this cry
It echoed back the aisle so long

His final Lullaby

At his last he ceased to be
Yet never did he die
For graceful vampires sung to he

His final Lullaby


A golden energy
Was rising out of my head
I shed my evil skin
And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
The impossible seems possible
This time I'm an electric wire
If the sun can radiate then so can I

  
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02-20-03

Tasty my dear, tasty like U~bites~



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~licks up the blood~


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I shed my evil skin
And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
The impossible seems possible
This time I'm an electric wire
If the sun can radiate then so can I

  
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02-20-03

Sick......

So loud, defeaning my thoughts to me
Sound of silence, drip drip in the darkness
Second sight watched me a vagabond

Solace, darkness brought to me tranquility
Sanctuary, free of all the hate pursuing me
Silence I’ve coveted long, greedy as I indulge
Sooths me, fills me, drowns me in its depths

She walks in to the sanctum of my heart
Sunk her teeth deep in to my flesh, plasma
Seeps through lacerations, enthused to be free

Silent she drank, blood drools her lips in bale
Serenity crowns her face, such festive requiem
Solemn I peer through the vallies of her eyes

Soft, gently I taste from the red, rich oozing
Sangria from her lips, exquisite, my craving
Sweet as nectar of gods, no other may ever

Satisfy me again, amid darkness I’d found
Sunshine, she shines, gift of life to dead eyes
Shimmer of ecstacy, yet a trace of volitality
Shattered through my hopeless mind, her

Sultry skin, flesh of velvet I found myself
Submissive to its every need and calling
Sheer as her gown a heart, so pure, so kind

Shadows grew longer, uneasy wore the air
Stench of death rushed through the realm
Slivering hiss of a thousand and one pestilent
Snakes, moment witnessed my fleeting sanity

Simple he’d taken me, baiting me with ecstacy
Sift through my pockets to find a sharp blade
Smiled as I turned and faced the masked, rage

Smolders as it soars, delivered a parting kiss
Sheath flew off the blade as I unveiled her,
Shrieks of her agony played a melody to me
Sharp, as the blade ran the flesh off her, left

Scorned, left alive, so she may watch me feed
Sneering, she cried, ascertained tactfully
Segmenting her, repent, remorse tear the eyes

Seized the moment, abrupt cutout her heart,
Sinister, the grin of preception, well fed as I
Savior the taste and smell, prior to devouring,
Sucking on her gentle heart, I walked away.

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mmm thats some nice words loving all the bloodshed


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Quote:
Originally posted by Sybelle
Im not one for rhyme, but this emerged..
Amusing? Or just damn strange


Lullaby

The ashen lips caressed the hymn
In the silence of a lie
For who could know what dwelt within?

His final Lullaby

The crimson host poured forth his song
But none could hear this cry
It echoed back the aisle so long

His final Lullaby

At his last he ceased to be
Yet never did he die
For graceful vampires sung to he

His final Lullaby
Lovely.........right up my street

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02-20-03

thankyou

however today I am uninspired


A golden energy
Was rising out of my head
I shed my evil skin
And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
The impossible seems possible
This time I'm an electric wire
If the sun can radiate then so can I


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02-21-03

Through the Eyes of a Sociopath

So lovely is Her sight
I keep Her close to Me
Ever since I slit Her throat
And set Her life blood free

In a jar I keep Her heart
The wardrobe holds Her head
The dagger that I killed Her with
Lies next to Me in bed

I do adore My gorgeous corpse
Each night while Im asleep
I dream about the Next Time
I can plunge My dagger deep





sadistic


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I was wrong, I don't mind
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~licks chops and waits for more~ yummy



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02-21-03

I like the word play



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02-21-03

Quote:
Originally posted by Sybelle
Through the Eyes of a Sociopath

So lovely is Her sight
I keep Her close to Me
Ever since I slit Her throat
And set Her life blood free

In a jar I keep Her heart
The wardrobe holds Her head
The dagger that I killed Her with
Lies next to Me in bed

I do adore My gorgeous corpse
Each night while Im asleep
I dream about the Next Time
I can plunge My dagger deep





Hooo, you write well...I love this one

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~bites Ali and Dee~

thankyou


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I shed my evil skin
And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
The impossible seems possible
This time I'm an electric wire
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Quote:
Originally posted by Sybelle
Through the Eyes of a Sociopath

So lovely is Her sight
I keep Her close to Me
Ever since I slit Her throat
And set Her life blood free

In a jar I keep Her heart
The wardrobe holds Her head
The dagger that I killed Her with
Lies next to Me in bed

I do adore My gorgeous corpse
Each night while Im asleep
I dream about the Next Time
I can plunge My dagger deep


very cool Syb's very, don't think i've ever visited your thread before, but now I want to see more of your wrinting damn it!


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