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Death Numbed Freedom - 07-18-07

Deep in the valley of bones,
While CHOKING
On a shotgun,
I saw our kings
Hunt and murder our SAVIORS.
fficeffice" />
As the swollen sky bursts.
It brings the
Cruel illusion
Of redemption.
While the kings MURDER all HOPE.

CHOKING on the eggs of our
Damned YOUNG,
I swallowed
My pride.
Willing to WORSHIP the STATIC.

The mind numbing LIGHT
CONSUMED my
SPIRIRTUALITY.
I follow
A mindless part of the mass.

While I gleefully sing of suicide
REALIZATION
Hits me.
We are
Accepting our mass DEATH.

Still NUMBED I stand above
The masses.
To speak of
FREEDOM
Like we’ve never been taught.
  
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07-18-07

Forever Omnipotent
fficeffice" />
Have you seen it?
The vacant stare
Of the masses
Stumbling in circles
Enshrouded
In ignorance

Why can’t they
Open their eyes
To the truth
We are slaves
To power
Greed and ourselves

Many think humans
Are superior
We are but a
Speck of sand
In an infinite universe
Spiritually blind

We must learn
To accept
We are a part of
Everything around us
As it is a part of us
We are no more or less than anything

Most are restrained
By their wants
Forgetting that
We need nothing
For fulfillment
But too accept we are fulfilled

Everything is so complicated
Because we make it that way
The only way we will ever be free
Is to stop manipulating reality
Learn to accept it as it is
Then you will see your true self
Through the eyes of the Tao
Immortal and forever omnipotent
  
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Deep in the valley of bones,
While CHOKING
On a shotgun,
I saw our kings
Hunt and murder our SAVIORS.
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YES


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Deep in the valley of bones,
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I saw our kings
Hunt and murder our SAVIORS.
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YES, can I use that as my myspace???!


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Sik Simon, yes you may just please give me credit.
  
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Hymn Of Damnation - 07-19-07

In these dirty cities we are dying.
It seems we like fueling the fire
That is even now, burning us to ash.
This society fed us anesthesia
We were all too numb when the flames commenced
Now it seems that no one cares.
As the death machines open
Most are already lined up, anxious to die.

The smell of fresh and putrid decay
Arrives as a reeking carrion wind.
As we sing hymns of damnation
The overzealous Consume our carcasses.
The “righteous” gnashing teeth
Create a death clatter heard all around.
There is no one left to mourn us
There is only fire where there used to be love.

As I patiently wait for my death
I can hear words of benediction
Calling through this utter madness
Reminding me of our forgotten freedom
Of times when we lived without “god’s” burden.
I see the eyes of the followers in line
All condemning me for my nonconformity
Living up to the role they’ve been assigned.

The police come and quickly herd me away.
Men with big guns and no patience
Nail me to a splintery cross
Leave me erect in the hot desert sun.
After three torturous days
My spirit finally leaves my physical body.
I then search the universe for your god.
I find him hidden in a cloak of pure dis-ease.

Near the ancient poison brook
I shared company the reptilian master
He spoke in a calm and lyrical banter.
Like that of a used car salesman.
Persuading me to drink of my death.
“It won’t kill you quickly.” he said
“Before you die you will achieve enlightenment.”
I replied “I think your false enlightenment is a poison unto itself"fficeffice" />
  
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Sik Simon, yes you may just please give me credit.
Of course, thank you! Dude you live in Tampa? lol I was born at Tampa general.


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07-19-07

Yes I live in Tampa. Originally I'm from Cheyenne WY. I love the enviroment here there are just too many people.


This world is not my home, nor is my body
These things will fade
Home is a moment you never leave
It is existence
  
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07-19-07

Her soft eyes were made of bright sapphire and moonlight
Slowly she approached me Licking her lips all the while
A beautiful seductress,
Paint the sky red, whore, thus the whole Earth becomes your bordello


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