The.chronicles.of.pain
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Clutching.what.eyes.of.isis.bring.to.me
Im.exposed.again
Inhuman.heart.pressing.up.against.the.glass
The.blood.of.another
Ripping.these.leaden.bullets.through.my....
i like it... i wasnt in to the the use of "heart" in two consecutive lines, maybe a symbol of a heart would be more appealing... i like the alliteration in a couple of the lines... didnt you already have a thread? why the new one?
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hmmm....i once used the word "epiphinomenal" in one of my poems, and my proff. was like "what kinda made up word is that"....but it isn't a made up word....itz a philosophical term.....
why did i tell you that?
I was masturbating
just contemplating
the color of suicide