Window copy, sit and stare
Looking for something that isn’t there
Suffer abortion
Lost in contortion
Righteousness, what’s in a name?
Dramatic Suicide, sorrow’s your maim.

Softly you stare.
Wanting something that isn’t there.
Enjoying every urge,
Cardiac obsession, drowning the surge.
Depression,
Clouded regression.
Demonic,
Catatonic.

Oh widow, you sit and wait.
Praying to God that it isn’t too late.
They’re all gone yet you stay still,
Not knowing what laid beyond the kill.
Oh darling, what do you see?
What is reaching beyond your blasphemy?
Can you understand what I know?
What you reap is what you sew

I can see right through your sin
I can see you hating the skin you’re in
I know your history, I know your past.
I can see you embracing your death at last.
You look to the sky, and pray for rain.
You know your life is lived in vain.
Now it’s time, take the tool
Open the window, the night air is cool
Feel the power, drag it down.
Imagine his highness and his holy crown.
Feel the break and lean right in
Flash back your life, corrosed by sin.
See the landscape and crawl and creep
See the horizon and jump in deep

Soaring ever lower
Can’t stop and cower
Another second and a giant blast
Thank God, your life is over at last

wow could you possibly have gotten more feeling into one poem? that was wicked

i especially like the line "i see you hating the skin you're in"

speechless............................

i have to say when i was reading it i was blown away buy the feeling you put into this wonderful piece of work.....wow......

i have to agree with doebathory with that one line " i see you hating the skin you're in"........

but anyhoo good job...keep up the good work ok....i would love to read some more powerful poetry from you.....

later
static

Absolutely blown away by your poem, no amount of praise from me would be enough. Can't wait to read more.

GIRL, there has to be more where this came from !!!!!!
that was way to good, to be an only child.
get back here and put us out of our misery.

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