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Poetry Discuss Black Sky in the The Pen forums; A quick glance down to see Shattered pieces that were me I think to myself That was my heart I stare blankly at my bloody art Choking on my suffering ...
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Black Sky - 01-24-07

A quick glance down to see
Shattered pieces that were me
I think to myself
That was my heart
I stare blankly at my bloody art
Choking on my suffering
Numbing tears roll down my face
I slowly bleed
I pass through the memories
Sifting through the misery
Trying to find the hapiness
I reach back to my sanity
They broke me down
Here i lay
The world has turned away from me
I've given up
I'm going to die
Undernieth my blackened sky


_/\_"Blinded by the blood, i wander these days of haze that have become my life, searching for the clarity that i fear may only come to me in death"_/\_
  
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01-24-07

I like the imagery!


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01-24-07

Wow, you have an amazing talent there uncli! lol, keep up with the amazong poetry, very dark, and sad
  
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Dark Religion(weird?) - 01-24-07

Brought to life out of confusion
Illusions cast upon the world
Drown your sorrows
in your fear
Bring on this darkness
Draw it near
Let this anger
consume your being
Watch it change
It morphes your soul
Watch the blackness
Blote out the light
Cast your magic
Out to the world
Unleash your silvery toungue
On the youth of today
Relish the chaos
That follows your wake
What is this new, dark belief
It is death

Abysmal

Emotionless

Misunderstood

Final


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01-24-07

lol, this is really wierd, i have no idea where i got the inspiration for this, i dont think it's very good.


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01-24-07

* Applauses loudly in background* BROVO! ENCORE!!
  
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03-06-07

TITLE: Lets dance

This game of life
The dance of death
A slow waltz down a trodden path
It's Overgrown with aging flowers
And our joy and happiness
A short fleeting glance
Then the tide will change
It always does
But what i would give
To be there with you
As the lights left your eyes
Forever in your arms
Ingrained into your bloodstained heart
For in our dance with death
Puppets, we are all strings and wooden limbs
We live our lives as such
With fake smiles and painted tears
With scars from the files of our puppeteers
We are as soul-less as the water
All beauty and no mind
Misery. Left without emotion.
Obey
And i take your poison with a smile


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03-11-07

God dammit that reminds me of a drug induced lust which restraints do not allow to be love. The isolated experience I could not describe. Write more and I will read it.


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