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Bitter Words - 01-13-02

Ok this is my poem thread. woohoo


i was happy in the haze of a drunken hour........but heaven knows im miserable now
  
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01-13-02

blaaarb!!Im so pissed! WTF?!!I typed out a poem ..yanked it from my brain and when i tried to post it..i get a message saying im not logged in anymore ( idid NOT log out) so i log back in and my lovely poem is lost! damn you comunist bastards! damn you all!!!


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01-28-02

longing
gentle whispers
soft fingers melting and molding my skin
kiss away the pain
whiping away the bitter memories with every brush of your hand
betrayal lurks around the bed sheets
nipping at the skin
but it passes us by
because at this moment we are
perfect


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01-28-02

that poem was really short.....i go through the same thing you just went through i hate the admin........also i love your avatar it is so gothic
  
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01-29-02

mmmhhhhmmm


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