dancing moons,
crying stars,
falling clouds,
and sinking bars,
singing leaves,
with rocks of snow,
swinging by a string,
weeping what you sow,
birds that swim,
fish that drown,
bears live in trees,
planes on the ground,
water that burn,
fire that's wet,
mouses playing blackjack,
hanging by your neck,
shadows that tease,
saying it's not so,
when air turns to water,
Before i let you go..........

this was for sept 11 for all the people who died that day...this is saying all this have to happen first before i let you go.....( to the fathers,mothers,daughters and sons who died that day)

i like it. it's good. Keep it up.

lacking off to the soundlees waves,
Smiling at death that shakes up the red graves,
Beautiful motions moving up in a heart beat,
careless ponder stacking on expectations,
risk are made by love and jelousy.
Sharing and judgement kills everyone burising the skull,
exercising the tears turning from help,
but leaving in misery is walking striaght into your death.