Hi guys, I thought i'd post some of my works to see what people think of it.

Pleasure mixed with Pain
Tie me up,
Hit me down.

I know you feel my pain with me.

Tie me up,
Hit me down.

Make me bleed my river of pain.

I know you watch me,
You know I want you.
But my life wont let you in.

I know you want me,
You know I watch you.
Let me drown if I cant be with you.

Loose me free,
Free from my pain.

Destroy my heart tonight.

That.
Sucked.

Why?