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The art of Joe Black - 02-19-03

Snapper told me to put it all into one thread. here it is...
  
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02-19-03

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" Thousand years til you crossed my way
thousand years but not here to stay
so i'm glad that i have met you
in the nick of time

Many things in the time between
many things i did'nt like to see
there's a place filled with emptyness
right among us

faces, feelings, memories of loving you
shaded but never fading
we've been disrupted
so rude

tell me why can't you be right here
tell me why you had to disappear
when i'm old you will be still young
may be dead - not gone"
  
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02-19-03

"God saw that he was tired..and laid him down to sleep"

"My tomcat watches me from above
he's visiting my dreams,
he's not a stupid animal
he's much more than it seems

The playmate of my childhood
my little brother
my white fang
the friendly ghost on my blue pillow
until i moved away

Another place another time - fourteen years are gone
he left the ground of
this mortal world
he was old while i'm still young

wandering beyond all prisons
jumping between stars
so he finally found me
and again friends we are

not forgotten but forgiven

-god saw that he was tired and laid him down to sleep..."
  
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02-19-03

"The man of steel"

"Saw the past of my life again
saw even places where i've never been

red and blue at my cover
a fist knocked me over..
i'm still tryin to take it like a man

I'm just small, I am not tall
shadows of trees wandering over the walls

i can feel the rising shame break through...
  
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02-19-03

"The queen of ice and fire"

" A friendly smile
a simple touch
your eyes tell more than words

I love you more than i could say
i'm blessed and so i'm cursed

You're an angel
beautiful
the cutest of all god's things

i'll never forget and never forgive
that someone
broke your wings

Superman could turn back time
to save his Lois Lane

I am only human
and i was much too late

Now you're a queen
of ice and fire
love and hate united

you'll always be the love of my life
and i never will deny it


Cannot sleep
cannot eat
i never will forget you

held you in my arms
forever in my soul
  
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02-20-03

AW Joe!

Bravisimo!


Black Rose of Secret Passions,
Blue Rose of Eternal Love,
Crimson Rose of Given Heart,
My Devotion is a garden ever blooming,
Beware the Daggered Thorns of Betrayal.


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02-22-03

"Burning in paradise"

When the sun goes down
it's the same old story
a heart broken into pieces
and left there on the way

I'm walking down the streets
in the darkest midnight hour
a dream can come true
under a cold black winter sky

my heart is pounding faster
i'm the hero of the day
do'nt know the desaster
that awaits me on my way

when the sun goes down
it's the same old story
a few years are gone
but i still feel broken

another street now
feeling lost and forsaken
not allowed to love
and be loved return

the rivers are burning
don't know where they end
sometimes i wanna follow
and be never seen again
  
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02-22-03

Joe,

I really like this one ! Is it a song ?

It sounds as if it should be ?...............................................Ma!...
  
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02-22-03

Yes indeed it is. The original name was "the trouble with the first date" But it sounded a little negative. Most of my poems were songs or ideas for songs.
  
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02-23-03

Nothing wrong with that!
Beautiful Writes Joe!


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02-23-03

i like them


"Night, do not look for him."


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02-24-03

Thank you thank you
I'm thinking about writing a book or something.
  
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