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Anti*Crucifixion - 02-05-08

Forever I waited to kill you
If you only knew
The true loneliness within my mind
All that time to contemplate
The greatest death of all mankind

The identity of your light paints a picture
Vision of a bloody figure
You are the center of my hate
Nothing will save you, not even fate
Your hand held dream will be crucified
For a promise that lied

A world tainted by your sins
Distorted a mystic fairy-tale
Settled in your confusion
Installed a constant reality to fail

I lost my will once in your consumption
But seen the sword of redemption
Now I yearn endlessly to kill
Corner you in and take away your will
My patience overwhelmed by perfection
Your death is my affection






***Your reign is crashing down. The hell you spawned is found. Your destiny is mine, your weakness I will find. My Sweet 666.***


she'll eat you alive.
  
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02-22-08

Very dark, but my type of poetry! Exceptionally done!
  
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I like this. it's good.
  
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