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Alone - 02-23-07

Alone,
Lost in the crowd,
A heavenly tone,
Draws me from the shroud,

Perpetual darkness,
Brightens on decending light,
Burning away mans malice,
Only to fade leaving eternal night.

The music is a guide,
Leading into redemption,
An escape from the chide,
Chides of people who cause temptation.

Make way to the tones,
The tones of sweet redemption,
Only to find the bones,
Of former temptation.

Cry in the despair of loneliness,
Know you'll always be alone,
Cast into perpetual darkness,
No more of redemptions tone.



Hope you guys like this one. It's an old one so it's not as good as some of the ones I've written recentlyl, but yeah.
  
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02-26-07

That is good...I really like it. Hope to see more soon.


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02-27-07

I enjoyed this. thank you for writing


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