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Aeternus · **... -** 01-30-02

As night gives way,
the cold remains
Body it stains,
so starts the day.

A new wind blows
Trough all I had,
my soul skyclad,
I to heaven throw,

But Lo! refused,
Nowhere to stay,
evade pain, for a day,
To such, get used.

Walk proud, EverSad,
Trough Time and Place,
Trough Death and Disgrace,
To find what you never had.

The journey thus, goes onwards...

*sighs softly*
And no, just words. I need to vent -somewhere-.

Sin · 01-30-02

I really wish you would get back on icq so that I could talk to you Aet...

Xxx-SIN-xxX

smoky_wisp · **hi aet.... -** 01-30-02

*hugs you*....

...vent it all out...I can empathize.....

...*hugs you more*....

slip_knot61 · 01-30-02

*applauds* more poetry...i see talent...yes...much talent indeed.

mightydreamer · **Re: ... -** 01-30-02

Quote:

Originally posted by Aeternus
As night gives way,
the cold remains
Body it stains,
so starts the day.

A new wind blows
Trough all I had,
my soul skyclad,
I to heaven throw,

But Lo! refused,
Nowhere to stay,
evade pain, for a day,
To such, get used.

Walk proud, EverSad,
Trough Time and Place,
Trough Death and Disgrace,
To find what you never had.

The journey thus, goes onwards...

*sighs softly*
And no, just words. I need to vent -somewhere-.

Well could not vote, for I kind'a liked it

Certainly comes out of the gate flying. The first four lines are jammin man, after that I think keepin with the rhym theme hurt the pace a bit, but expressive and enjoyable

Thanx for the words

mark · 01-30-02

thats was very well written aeternus........i like how you used your ryhmes in different order..

mark

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