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9-11 - 09-28-02

I wrote this poem in science class and it was read to the whole school anonymously and some grade 12's started crying I felt bad Well I haven't posted in awhile so I thought this would be a good thing to post

I held your hand again
Before you reached the door
You kissed me on the cheek
And said “I’ll see you at four.”

I watched you through the window
As you slowly drove away
I would have you longer
If I’d known it was your last day

So quickly an hour passed
Or maybe even two
I turned on the radio; something’s wrong
I knew somehow it happened to you

Near you a plane crashed
Into the tower; almost through
Hundreds must have died
But no one actually knew

My breath was so short
My heart beating frantically for you
I ran out the door to the car
I had to know if it was true

My knuckles were white
As I clutched the steering wheel
The world was flashing quickly
Almost if it wasn’t real

Everything was burning
Heavy smoke tainted the air
I could see the ones who escaped
I did not see you standing there

Out of nowhere
Another plane streaked the sky
This one hit your building
And slowly I began to cry

The buildings were crumbling
And twisted metal began to fall
Hundreds more were being smothered
Less were surviving after all


I looked to the dust and rubble
And I knew you were somewhere inside
I prayed that you were coming back to me
Or even if you were still alive

Days went by
And I still hoped you were coming home
Until I received that call
That made me drop the phone

I touched your face once more
Before they closed the lid
Severe burns cut your life
My tears could not be hid

They told me terrorists did this
And maybe it’s true
But I could think of
Was the baby I was carrying…that belonged to you…
  
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An Answer - 09-28-02

This is what I read to reply to my first poem..I made more people cry sheesh

I'm sorry I didn't mean to make you cry
I just wanted you all to know
You're not all so immune to things
So far away from home

It touches us all deep
Even if we don't always
No one deserved this pain
No one deserved to die

I'm sorry about what I did
About how I made you think
About the suffering a year ago
Sometimes emotion is our only link

I know we all did our best
Yet it felt there was so little we could do
Just please always remember those
Who died loving you

I'm sorry for the loved ones
Who will no longer be awaking
I'm sorry I'm not crying
But my heart too, is slowly breaking

I know I'm just one
And all I can do is write
But somehow I'm happy
My words can help make things right

I'm sorry I can't do any more
I've given all I can give
I'm sorry I'm still here when hundreds had to die
I'm so sorry...because we all deserve to live
  
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09-28-02

dear.... that's so touching... it really gets some emotions in my heart... so painful, yet so beautiful. I love it. *hugs* you know where you can find me, Icy. I am here for you, my friend.


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