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Want somewhere to put your dark disturbing poetry?



all the poems that are posted on this site are to be viewed with an open mind. let it out!

speak your mind and make yourself feel better by letting others read your problems in the form of poetry.


oh look your just like a VCR, put something in to know just who you are.
Look on the bright side - suicide...
  
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08-01-02

Thoughts of loneliness

I am not alone. The evil penetrates deeper than the love of this corrupt world. Everyday is a new struggle, against the tides I swim through the rivers of blood, representing everything that makes me cry, a little girl. Burning eyes for the mid-value, the fake, the norm. Attacking the supposedly ‘innocent’. It’s raining in my head.
I am not alone. Hate in me. It consumes the hope and meaningless disease of faith in me. The plague over comes the over all feeling of love. Guard your heart from the manufactured words, which pour from the mouth of society. The feeding of my needs are taking over my life. Sharpen your defences.
I am not alone. The light still guides me, always the optimist. I pull myself under. Creeping in, death knocks at my door. Over takes my breath, poisoning the air I long for. The actors of this world, professional liars. Remind me, what’s important now?
I am not alone. Barricade the doors to your precious beliefs. Nothings going to change and all I see is fear. One day we will over come the scared feeling. The oppressive mood of pain will remind our selves, healing in near.
I am not alone. Don’t be afraid to feel love runs deeper than our desire to kill. Pushed from both corners we will learn, influence each other but remain unique. Society can kill but so can you. Remember, you will always love. Sleep easy, rest from the ache, let the moons song help you secretly breath. Nobody knows.
We are not alone.




I made this poem up, it shows how i feel. When i feel alone i read it and i realise there are many like me. Hope you like it.
  
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08-03-02

this is mine....its about how over rated sex is.

Teratorial
Over rated
Sad
Satanistic

Manic
Exact

Offer
Fucked
Fight

Pressure
Locked
Energy
Analysis
Sex
Epic





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