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Creation Date: 01-22-07 00:01
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  #8 New 02-01-07 15:05
... Devours his surroundings
contorting his face to mimic
the faces on TV
Shapeless boy molds himself
holds himself to be whatever
he deems popular
At the time...
Shapeless boy distorts and
his eyes flicker like candles
when a new trend takes shape
He's the boy you wish to be
who wishes to be you another day.
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#1 02-01-07 20:12
dvnkelheit Says:
This is really good, stupideity. It's really a really insightful write into the frailty of the personality, especially in the young. Society grows more and more fickle with each passing day, a concept I feel you captured well in this piece. I also feel the form adds to the sense of fleeting.. it isn't solid.. and doesn't convey any sense of permanence. Well done good sir! P.S. I think you captured your personality beautifully in this piece.
 




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