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| Re: Re: please don't be offended -
05-22-02
Quote: Originally posted by (antihero)
Errors in your post:
Two missing commas in first sentence: one between "here" and "and", and one between "anyone" and "but."
"...Rules of the english grammar" is incorrect; it should be, "the rules of english grammar."
Comma should be between "posts" and "and" in the fourth sentence.
The period at the end of sentence five should be a semi-colon, if you wish to maintain your line of thought.
I'd put dashes on either side of "or any" in the sixth sentence. Without them, the sentence is too awkward.
Missing comma between "out" and "so" in the last sentence.
Missing period at the end of "thank you for your time."
Missing comma after "sincerely."
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