I am in need of some honest reviews of copyrighted lyrics that will soon be going on my band's third album. I consider the material very dark, and it is very much understandable if it is not in everybody's taste. It touches on themes of humanity, or the lackthereof, so all post and comments are greatly appreciated! Here is the first song:

Bruising Thighs:

Guilty pleasures whispered sighs
Candles drip on bruising thighs,
Bodies bleed in unison
On shardes of broken love.
Anger morphing into bliss
Shackeled to a single kiss,
Vengence is a meal eaten
Shaved between your legs.

Hate is your religion
So practice what you preach
Bite the pillow darling
You're still a whore to me.

Matted hair carnal sweat
Tissue welts a painful red,
All your indescretions
You thought I'd never know.
Body tense and quivering
Every pour is yielding,
Right before you come apart
I think I'll walk away.