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09-23-01

I like your song, it's really good esp. the first verse, I liked it lots Keep 'em flowin and I'll be sure to pop in once in a while to read.
The other ones that werent yours were cool too, the first one reminds me of once of my own personal experiences
Anyways I'll talk to ya later hun

Take Care


"Eyes of a fallen angel, eyes of a tragedy." ~APC
"Enrobed in endless black
It trails along behind me,
Dusting my path.
My shape is lost
Within this grand excess.
Somehow, my hands escape through holes,
Holding many roses.
I have no feet,
I can barely see in front of me;
My face has also been shrouded.
One tear is shed; still I am shocked.
The first person I ever saw die
Lies beneath this stone and dirt.
I place the roses on the mound,
Bask in the silence of the dark.
I turn, and walk away;
Unable to say goodbye. "
~Me.
  
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