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04-22-08
Not bad.
i personally think the end was a tad over dramatic, maybe cliche...
But up 'till then it was a solid peice, heartfelt--plus, i like the idea of an age-old dilemma told in a modern or even post-modern fashion.
Nice, i like it. Will you post more? if I can make just nine people a day stare at me in abject horror and confusion... i think i've done my job.
there are only 10 kinds of people in the world: those that can read binary, and those that can't.
you know what? i still want a girl with a short skirt and a long jacket. (%) |