Thank you for writing. There is a fast direction for Invisible that resembles a water droplet - steady to begin with, picking up speed, and then splashing. It was an enjoyable ride. I'm not a big fan of bloody stuff because that imagery is overplayed, but putting that stigma aside allows your work to do what poetry does. The repetition does not match too well, for the eyes and mind tend to focus on the repeated words (ex: beneath) when the remainder is short and independent of the subsequent, preceding, etc... The picture you painted is not about the color but the trip. At any rate, keep posting your stuff to inspire others.

thats my critique, not sure if you wanted one but it is presumed if you post stuff here I believe.