Originally Posted by sixxx(sic)six

Interesting work. Definately a style of poetry that caters more towards those who love linguistic choices: the sound of words and the way words work together. The first two were better than the other (in my opinion) . . . I usually prefer longer pieces, but with your style, short pieces work well. Short lines, however, don't seem to grasp that same poetic feel that this style is able to create . . . (but that's just my opinion).

Good stuff!

p.s. you don't need to "sign" or "date" your works to indicate ownership . . . I suggest you read up on copyright laws as 1. any work (no matter what media) that's produced is immediately the sole property of its author; 2. any work displayed in any form of media (such as the internet) is a form of publication. So if this is your work, then congrats, you're now published!