I'm back . . .

I uh, skipped part 2 . . . sorry, it's just my personal hatred and self-applied-ignorance that I refuse to read poems with rhyme-schemes.

So on to part 3 . . . um, interesting. I liked the way it read . . . very, BAM! and in your face. I'm sure there's some kind of meter present, but the flow of the poem really helps it to keep on rolling. Um, I don't quite get the overall point of the poem, or why it's a poem, but I still enjoyed it nevertheless . . . but what was the symbolism of the apple? Also, I didn't like the last two lines . . . just kind of seemed thrown into the piece to help it give an ending. I almost think the line "her delicate trust against the cunt of another" would be a nice lil' ending. Overall, I liked the poem. Good flow, nice lines, and overall entertaining.