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Originally Posted by SaturnAscends Sry ive made another chapter but it's impossible to type without my keyboard so look forward to a chapter 2 and 3 soon. |
I understand what you wrote:
Do you understand what you wrote?
Why are you writing this?
Where are you getting your ideas from?
In other words: have you ever read any book or heard anything similar to what you have written?
Is what you have written: merely a rehash of things you have heard or seen in books or movies? Or on the Internet?
or are the ideas and plot, as far as you know... coming only from your inner self?
What reason do you have to write this?
Why are you writing this?