First, run your post through a spell checker. Makes it easier on everybody.

Second, be descriptive about the subject of your satire. When, where, why, how, etc. would all be helpful so that we are on the same page and can understand what you are babbling about.

As it stands, I have no clue what you are talking about. I do know there are identifiable names within the body of your text, but beyond that I don't know where, when and what these people were doing.

Be specific and raise a question that people can answer. If this is just a thread for you to bitch, I would suggest going to a forum dedicated to that.

- SOup