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Originally Posted by errantrogue hmm... (thinking about the poem, not trying to influence or anything)... you know, i think it was fine until that third stanza... then you kind of turned into a grocery store commercial... heh. |
youre looking at it wrong. try this....after each section there in the 3rd part, close your eyes like it says and imagine it ok? dont look at it like its a commercial cos its not. its a poem. do more than read it.
when i close my eyes that whats i see from my summers past.