Originally Posted by (antihero)

How many of you people skipped over this post? Let me sum up: this poem was a total joke, written to suck on purpose. It's supposed to be terrible, much like all the useless goth poetry we get here. Get it? It doesn't even need to be critiqued, because it wasn't serious. It'd be like if I took a picture of a dead opossum's asshole, and submitted it for photograph of the month. Jokes? Granted, it's a total cliche that's been done before, but it makes me cringe when people actually analyze it.