a lot of that makes sense, very astute of you fine gentlemen...it's actually just building up to the creation of a world my husband created for roleplaying, once i get the basis of the world, the stories will be limitless, and very personal as they'll be based on actual characters i've played and have interacted with right now it's just trying to envision my husband's chicken scratch into a work of literature.

i'll definitly post some of my later paragraphs...i admit i brushed through the creation, and then started focusing on the characters that actually procreate the gods of this world, and then they're sent into the more mudane aspect of "the creators" world, to interact with the less than immortal sort, and prove they are worthy for the titles of god.

i appreciate the advice, as it is the bare bones inspiration of a hope for publication...maybe even a book deal, but that's a high aspiration right now.