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Originally Posted by sixxx(sic)six you questioned yourself?!
admit it!!!!! you think i suck!!!!! 
my life....has cease....to have.....any meaning......please excuse me while i throw myself in the shit infested Ohio river..... |
i do enjoy reading your stuff...this story was okay, i've enjoyed some of your other writing more...but see nothing inherently amiss with this one, i did like the end where he offered the spoon...in fact i loved the obsession to kill with the spoon aspect but the rest of the story, just sort of flowed...it didn't grab my attention, kind of like riding a horse at a slow walk rather than a wild canter...
happy?
