the mixing sounds great, nothing musically overpowers any other element, but your vocals are just too flat, not out of key or anything, just flat. in your little voice solo in the vocalist it sounds like you've got a decent range. you even start to use it at the beginning of the second verse, but then you drop back down to that lower range and it just kills it for me. lifting dust had a cool intro, but i couldn't hang with the whole song. maybe if i ate a fistful of valium before hand i'd get it better.