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12-21-04
yeah, i'm sorry lily......either you meant to say that, but didn't, or you just totally changed your statement.....
nonetheless, giving negative criticism, whether in a "nice" manner or "not-so-nice, but-not-bashing" manner is still negative criticism......saying "hey man, i think if you did _________ your poem might sound better" might have a different connotation than "i didn't like your poem, and i'll tell you why" (which is how i go about it)....but A. itz still negative criticism, and that connotation is for children and ignorant adults who are easily offended, not intellectuals.... B. there's also another connotation present, "I THINK YOUR POEM would sound better with ________" reads as a suggestion of I AM A BETTER WRITER AND SHOULD WRITE YOUR POEM FOR YOU...whereas "I didn't like it, lemme tell you why" is more of a critical opinion on the matter.....
anywho....yeah.....everyone calm down....calm down........ I was masturbating
just contemplating
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