Yeah...although it is difficult to critisize someones work, because that work is something the person has put their heart and feelings into, it is easier if you think that hiding remarks about how the poem could be made better is more negative than constructive critisism anyway!

I find it hard sometimes to critisise someones work, such as FuckDolls, because there is so little you can pick about it, but if you look for long enough it is possible to find something, whether a mere punctuation mistake, to let the person know about........a lot of poetry on this forum is absolutely amazing, better than a great deal of what I read from books each day, so keep up the work, and the critisisms, its all good!!!

Thanks

Byesy Bye!