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Hey, welcome to the Darkforum and welcome to the smokeroom!

I like your poem, it has a certain degree of uniqueness that I find attractive in poetry!

I cant offer much critisism about it other than for you to maybe structure the middle part of your poem, the big block of words, differently, so it resembles more of a poem than a short story!

I hope you post more stuff, and enjoy darkforum.............Christ.....I sound like a spokesman for the damn place!

Byesy Bye!


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